Off and on over the last decade or so, I’ve been working on a sci-fi novel. I wanted to create a cohesive fictional world with believable characters, and so I wrote a few short stories to help me flesh out my characters and universe. The following is one of those stories.
First there was nothing.
Nothing formed into blackness, empty darkness, cold stale air, nothing in front, nothing behind, nothing to see, nothing to feel, nothing to assure that one had not stepped through a doorway into hell. The darkness was overwhelming, almost palpable in its lack of substance.
Then, slowly, movement could be discerned. There was still no light, no light, and yet the blackness seemed to shift, as one shadow moved over another, as if the demons of the darkness had sensed an intruder and were prepared for an ambush, eager at the prospect of blood leaking through their fangs.
Near the center of this swirling darkness stood a mass of even darker black, if such a thing were possible, one that did not move, did not shift, did not run. The mass merely listened and watched, peering into the inky obscurity as if to discern its inner nature, to reveal its hidden secrets. The swirling shadows seemed to hang back from it, leaving a wide berth of complete and total emptiness, a black ring so removed of light that even the darkness hung back from it.
Suddenly the mass began to move, stalking slowly, creeping forward, making no more noise than a shadow.
Mace Stouhn was used to darkness. Darkness concealed, darkness offered safety. Mace employed the darkness, used it, bent it to his will. Some said he was a master of darkness; others said it was the other way around. Very few that knew enough about him to say one way or the other lived long enough to find out which was true.
There were times, of course, when Mace himself wondered, wondered if he would burn in hell for what he did, for what he had done and planned to do. Sometimes he would lie in the darkness and ask questions for which there were no answers, question whether or not things might have been different if…
But it did not matter. Even if he had suddenly found an answer, realized that his way was error, it would change nothing. He was what he was. He knew no other way to live. Other than to die.
And the darkness swirled on, washing over him in deafening silence.
Suddenly, not silence. Mace froze, his microscopic progress forward halted completely, as he listened. A sound, no louder than the breeze over heather, of an exhalation and, quieter still, a desperate inhalation.
Fool.
This would not be the first target that had given itself away by clinging to the temporary silence of holding its breath. Mace knew that when fear and adrenaline were rushing through one’s veins, even absolute silence could sound louder than the crack of a rail gun. One’s own heartbeat seemed to crash and betray, and the breath necessary for life could sound remarkably like a death knoll, repeated over and over with every exhalation.
But it was an illusion, an illusion that pushed the untried and the beginners and the fools into mistakes like this one had make. While the halting of respiration did create silence, the inevitable gasp, however restrained, was a hundred times louder than normal breathing.
A very important lesson to learn. A lesson that, apparently, this target never had learned. A pity.
And then a sound that nearly made Mace’s lip curl with disgust: the near inaudible hum that signaled a target lock. This mistake was not that of a mere beginner. It was that of an idiot, controlled by fear. It was probably laying facedown, its treacherous weapon held in front of it, lying in its own urine, tears running down its face as it contemplated its death. If one required a computer to target and fire one’s weapon, one had no business using a weapon. And though the computer’s hum was unhearable to the untrained ear, Mace had spent hours listening to it and many such sounds, imprinting them upon his memory for just such a situation as this—so had every other half-decent assassin on the planet. If the target did not know this, it was a fool for its lack of preparation; if it had known, it was afool for making that kind of slip. Mace did not unduly enjoy the kill at the end of a hunt, any more than one enjoys answering the final question on an exam except in that it means that the exam is over; but he would not particularly regret ending this particular target’s pathetic existence. But it was a moot point: Mace’s assignment did not necessarily call for the target’s death. Only his takedown.
Mace began moving again, millimeter by millimeter, pushing slowly through the darkness. He did not expect that his target could see him, but that did not matter. One did not survive by making that kind of assumption, and even if it was true, the krefek’s computerized weapon could sense him.
The weapon most likely sensed body heat, but there was a small chance that it was of the rarer motion detecting variety; if it was the former, than moving slowly made no difference, but he did it anyway against the chance that it was the latter. And anyway, there was no point in completely giving away his position just yet.
As he moved, he waited, his ears straining to hear through the swirling blackness, his eyes striving to penetrate it. He waited, and would wait for days if necessary, for the right moment. The moment just after his target’s last mistake, and just before his target’s last breath.
And it came, with a faint change in the rhythm of the target’s breathing, with a sudden sense of danger and immediacy floating through the darkness, and the unpardonable scritch of a neglected and long uncleaned trigger being pulled.
Mace hurled himself backwards, feeling the projectile leave a hot red trail along his forehead, caught himself on the heels of his hands, letting himself hit the floor and somersaulting back over his head, coming up in a crouch that instantly became a leap towards the source of the shot.
The target—a man, dressed in black—screamed as Mace’s apparition-like form soared out of the depthless darkness, desperately trying to shift his aim. But too late.
Mace twisted in midair, bring his hand around in a violent surgical strike that caught the target on its wrist, sending its weapon skittering away, accompanied by the snap of bone and another scream, this of pain.
He landed on the target, bringing his knee up hard into its midsection, hearing the outward rush of air and feeling the form doubling over in sudden agony. His movements as fast as instinct, he reached his left arm around the target’s neck and grabbed its opposite shoulder, at the same time grasping at the target’s left arm with his right hand, suddenly lifting and pulling the target’s body around so that it faced the floor, and then slammed it down onto the cold steel surface, hard enough to stun but not to incapacitate.
Before the target could even register what had happened, its broken wrist was pulled around behind its own back far enough to touch the opposite shoulder.
The man struggled briefly, yelling incomprehensibly, then, “Stop! I give! I give!” Its voice was strangled, though that was hardly strange, as it was probably struggling to breathe, was writhing in pain, and had blood leaking into its mouth from at least one place. It was helpless, desperate.
But this was not the first helpless and desperate person Mace had encountered. Reaching down with his free hand, he touched his fingers gently to the targets unbroken arm, leaning down to whisper into its ear.
“Try it. I dare you.”
For an eternal instant, the man tensed; then, suddenly, went limp, the poisoned holdout blade falling from its hand with a resigned curse.
Before the target could begin begging and make him sick, Mace reached down and gripped the back of its head, applying pressure to two points just above the neck, and felt the body go completely slack with unconsciousness.
Mace did not move for several seconds, listening, feeling. More than once a target’s body had been rigged with doomsday weapons, usually poison gases, that would activate at sudden unconsciousness or death. A coward’s tactic, but one that made certain sense, from a victim’s point of view. But if an attacker was skilled enough to make a takedown, and yet stupid enough to fall victim to such a simple ploy, he deserved to die for the waste of talent.
Pushing his heavy frame off the limp body, Mace reached into a compartment in his jet black camouflage and pulled out a tiny recorder. Activating it, he began to speak quietly to it.
“This is to inform you that you have used your first and your last chance. The Head of Graneeda are lenient when they can afford to be. Your interference was meaningless enough that they have decided to let you live. Consider this the first day of the rest of your life.
“Just how long that life will be, is up to you.
“You have been warned.”
Mace placed the tiny recorder in the man’s ear and set its activation system—it would play back the message when the target regained consciousness. Standing, he paused, contemplating. Was it a twinge of regret that he felt, at leaving this target alive?
Perhaps. The man’s utter incompetence and cowardice disgusted him, and he regarded the target as one regards a stain on a garment. If Mace had his way, the man would have died for being such a poor excuse for human.
Of course, by that reasoning, if Mace had his way, half the population of the earth would be eliminated.
Oh, well. One can always dream.
Silently, he moved off, disappearing into the blackness, leaving no trace of his presence, other than his unconscious target lying in a pool of drying blood.
And the darkness swirled on.











